Mr Noisy summary (3)

This is the third text that arrived in my e-mail address:

He is a red ball cartoons, he screams a lot of, and he hears everything milers. He sneezes very strong, and all the people listens it. He goes to sleep, and snores a lot of. When he gets up, he puts his watch in time. When he goes in to the shop to go buy, he knocks the door, it all tremble, his steps are very strong (pum, pum, pum,…).
Mr. Bacon and Mss. Crimb speak about Mr. Noisy, and they say that he talks very high and he doesn’t hear good. Mr. Noisy goes to shopping. Mss. Crimb is baker. Mr. Noisy goes to buy bread, he screams so much and she says that she doesn’t listen to Mr. Noisy. Then, Mr. Noisy goes to the Mr. Bacon’s shop, and Mr. Noisy asks screaming one pizza. (I Liked a pizza!!!), and he says that he doesn’t listen the he speaks low and he asks him please. He goes at home and when he arrives he stops to think and he opens the door carefully. Mr. Noisy finally speaks whispering.

The text is OK. There are mistakes, of course, and the tense is not the past simple, but at least the present tense is used grammatically most of the times. However, there is something that should not be there: Mr. Noisy asks for a PIECE Of meat, not for a PIZZA.