Mr Noisy summary (2)

This is the second summary. It's much shorter than the first one, but that is not really so relevant: I wanted a summary and summaries are short. However, there are some mistakes:

1. history (study of civilisation) is not story (a tale, a narrative).
2. the majority of verbs are not in the past form. We should remember that the past form is the most common tense in stories.
3. Unfortunately, there are other mistakes. They could have been prevented if the author of this text had taken down more notes from the original story.

This is the text:

Mr. Nosy history speaks of how his life, One day when he wake up the town hears he. He decide go shopping. He lived in a mountain. When he walk down doing very much noise, when he came’s to the shop ask what he wanted, and screaming at each store until the owners decided to ignore him when he came again. Mr. Noisy the next day went shopping, he speaks very noisy but the owner does not hear, Mr. Noisy said again but normal ton, he learned the lesson that when I walked through the woods to silent. And from that time became very silence.