Mr Noisy summary (1)

This is the first composition that I received from you. It is well written and contains many of the original sentences from the story, which means that she was paying close attention and took down lots of notes!

Mr Noisy

Mr Noisy was a very noisy person.
The story started when Mr Noisy was sleeping in his bedroom on a top of a montain.
One day rang the alarm clock and he woke up, but the sound of the alarm clock was very special because the sound was the same that the fire alarm.
Mr Noisy decided that he was going to go shopping. Then Mr Noisy walked down the montain and he went to Baker's shop and he asked for one loaf, after that he came to the Butcher's shop and asked a peace of meat.
Afterwards Mrs Grump and Mr Baker run into street and they started to spoke about Mr Noisy, because he was always asked shouting and finally they agree on.
Followin day Mr Noisy was going to go shopping. First he went to Baker's shop and asked for one loaf, but Mr Baker didn't give this because Mr Noisy asked shouting. Second he went to Butcher's shop and did the same, so Mr Noisy went to his bed for sleep hungry.
The next day he did the same. First he went to Baker's shop and asked one loaf shouting and Mr Baker didn't give it, so he stopped and he thought, and other time Mr Noisy asked for a one loaf but he asked normally without shouting, suddenly Mr Baker gave one loaf. Second in the Butcher's shop did the same.
Finally Mr noisy realized that if he spoke normally would be happier.